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    " YESSS!!!" I shouted,  we're going to live to another place." Hi, I'm Nicole Gonzales, I'm ten years old and now we're going to live to another place for our fourth time, and I'm so excited," I introduced myself to the lady in the plane. "You know my life is on a plane every three years and a half, this time we're going to live in Guatemala." The lady looked at me in a funny and weird looking face, I told her I was sorry because, I didn't know her and I started talking to her. She respond to me like this " It's ok darling," I was glad she wasn't mad at me. That lady knows all about my life now, but she doesn't know something, do you want to know? I'll tell you but, you can't tell anyone... I HAVE SUPER POWERS!!!

     We arrived to Guatemala with a giant smile up to our eyes. I started asking when will we arrive to our new house. When we finally arrived , I got really nervous. I was nervous of going to school, in the next two days.

     It was the next day and I was helping my parent take everything out of the boxes. When I finished helping them I went to see what was my sister doing outside, she was riding her bike. I went grabbed my bike and started playing with her.

     It was the first day of school and both of us were really nervous and excited. When I arrived most kids looked at me and talked about me . I started using my super powers by accident, I had turn white and I started jumping like a frog, so kids looked at me really weirdly. I arrived home and explained everything to my parents. I'm a really good girl so I gaved school another chance.

     Next day in the very sunny morning I jumped out of bed and got dressed as fast as rain can touch the ground. I was absolutely ready to jump in the car and head to head to school. When we arrived, I started talking to some girls that are in my class. The girls said bye and whipped their hair in my face and left. I started getting really red as a tomato after those girls left. I was moving like a hamster and wanted to use my superpowers!!! I couldn't wait so... BAMM went this mean girls hair, it had catch on fire. I felt bad but good at the same time.

     I got back from school and told my parents what had happen during school. My parents told me in a really calm way " problems are not always solve with powers, if you want those girls to stop bothering you, you need to defend yourself."

     Days past and people kept on bothering me , I tried and tried to defend myself but, it was impossible until...

     One day I got really mad and was tired of people telling me what to do and bothering me so, when the mean girls were starting to bother me because, I had never defend myself and just stayed there, finally I stood up for myself and for all the persons that had my same problem. " if you're coming here to bother me please leave because, I don't want to know any of the things you want to tell me. Stop bothering everyone." I shouted to the mean girls. Everyone stayed with their mouths wide open because, no one had stand up for themselves and no one ever spoke like that to them.

     I came back from school and told my parents what had happen today, they were so proud of me they gave me one hundred dollars. So next day everyone invited me to go with them and to be their friends. The mean girls camed and said sorry to me, and I told them, I accepted but, that I didn't want them to bother me again.

     At the end I made lots of friends and the mean girls turned nice. The bad thing is that I have to move to another place. I was really sad but, my parents said we could come and visit them once in awhile.


 


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Paulina
05/14/2013 5:34pm

Your story was awesome! I can see you included lots of things that happen to you in the real life, like that you move a lot from place to place. I like how Nicole´s parents tell her that problems don´t always need to be solved with super powers. I think it was very amazing that when Nicole stood up for herself the mean girls stopped bullying her. Is it difficult to move a lot from place to place? Is it difficult to make new friends and to leave your home?

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Nicolas
05/15/2013 12:54pm

Your story was great. I really liked the tittle it really have the reader attention. What inspire you to write this story. You included a lot of good details and interesting words. How many times did you have move to a new place? I never move from one place to other. Like frm Guatemala to United States. Never.

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