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During my Spring Break I stayed in Guatemala because, my dad had a surgery on a saturday morning. He is ok now, it only hurts a little and that’s it. He can drive but, he doesn’t do it because, sometimes it hurts a little. I played with my neighbor and best friend Sophia and her sisters too. We did lot’s of things, and even had a sleepover. They had some friends for only one night and they were going back to their houses. They are really nice. That family has a girl named Sonia that’s six or seven years old and a boy named Reece that’s almost my age,  I’m  ten and he is eleven.


During all that time we made different things. Two days I went to see a movie with my sister and my mom. One day I made a fantastic mango with a special delicious cream ice cream with my three neighbors. It was the BEST in the entire world!!! Wednesday morning we started thinking what else could we do. We thought to go to Paseo Cayala to go and try out the new canopy and the other games it has. The last day of the spring break we went to my club, it was really fun but there was a problem. The problem was that the club was closed but we could go and swim, play soccer and we ordered a pizza from Pizza Hut.


This was one of the best and funniest spring breaks I have had. I’m always going to remember it since I enjoyed it a lot. Next time I hope I can go somewhere with my three neighbors, Ale, Lucia and Sophia.




 


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Ariela B
04/10/2013 7:26pm

I really really said what you did, I know you stay home but I think you still pass a good time! Poor your dad. Did you did a lot of things in the sleep over? Did you had a great time?

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Agustina
05/15/2013 1:04pm

Dear Ariela,
Yes I feel bad for my dad too but now he is better. We did a lot of things in the sleep over and I had a great time.
What did you do on your spring break?
Sincerely,
Agustina.

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Ariela B
04/10/2013 7:28pm

I really really like how you said your story. I know you stay in your house but I think you pass a good time. Did you had fun on your sleepover?

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Katerina
04/10/2013 7:30pm

Dear Agustina
You really described what you did each day of spring.Your paragrafs had a lot of details and compleat sentences.I am sad for your dad but you alredy said that he was ok.

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Giuseppe
04/17/2013 4:34pm

Wow i really liked that you put a lot of details and thats good. I also liked how you put what you did each day of spring break and with who who where them. It sounded really fun what you did.

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Diana
04/17/2013 6:18pm

Dear Agustina,
That spring break sounds super fun. Were the sleep overs fun? I hope they were, because they sounded fun. This spring break I went to Miami it was really fun. Did any of your family come visit?
Bye,
Diana

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Agustina
05/15/2013 1:07pm

Dear Diana,
Yes the sleep overs were really fun and we did a lot of things. No, unfortunately my family lives really far away so nobody came.Did you have fun in Miami? I hope you did!!!
Sincerely,
Agustina.

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Jean Paul D
04/18/2013 4:45am

That was a really awesome spring break. I loved how you put in your story many fact and details. This was a very good story.

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Jeanie
04/23/2013 3:23pm

Dear Agustina;
Wow I think your spring break was fantastic. I loved how you described everything with a lot of details and it was very easy to read and to understand. I think you had fun during the sleep over, I wanted to have a sleep over with my friends but instead I went to Xela. I'm very sad about your dad and I hope your dad is better and I hope that he doesn't get sick or an accident again. I really enjoyed your spring break writing.

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Jeanie
04/23/2013 3:26pm

How was your sleep over? What things did you did in the sleep over?

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Sebastian q
05/15/2013 1:00pm

I like your spring brake did fun I bet you did you said it was your favorite spring brake ever. What happen to your dad ? I am sorry for your dad . What did the doctors did with him? My dad one time happened that too but playing American football.

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